Paper Prototype Critiques 1:

Paper Prototype Critiques 1:
Ant Lion
- Educational purpose through game.
- There might be too much random factors which confuse the players
- Prototype is balance, clear rules and results.
- Art work has potential to improve to higher quality standard.
- Since this is board game style, I’m looking forward to this game turn digital.

Fins of Fury
- Tadpole development story through search and rescue.
- Interesting story line, 3D art work are required to be successful
- Prototype has clear rules and results, and easy to understand.
- Prototype has clearly illustrated actual game since they shares the same game concepts and mechanics.

Mizu
- Exploring in different environment through different stages as a water element.
- Nice artwork, even though is a bit like Pokemon, but remarkable
- Prototype is a board game, used game board, dice, player and evil chaos.
- The physical prototype has given me a clear idea of the game.
- Prototype focuses too much in the art work; I think it can be expand a bit in the game mechanic area.

Untitled
- Adventure game with puzzle and enemy fighting.
- The actual game sound interesting
- Prototype is balance, rules are cleared.
- Idea is quite similar to the game in the market.